Sunday, 2 October 2011
Terrible Moments in Taglining
"For years the wooded mountains have been the setting for many myths, horror and ghost stories told one generation to the next on camping trips. Only, what no one ever thought to consider was, what if there was someone in those woods worse than myth imaginable?"
Firstly, that's a tag-paragraph. Secondly, it's badly written. I won't bother with the technicalities, the copy speaks for itself. "Worse than myth imaginable"?
Check this out: "What if those campfire ghost stories were true?"
My services are for hire.